tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598651079166807274.post3187455815365649408..comments2024-02-12T00:44:04.250-08:00Comments on Quest Five: Spanking & Chastening: RevelationAshley Jhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598651079166807274.post-21161567660571412742009-12-25T02:30:15.842-08:002009-12-25T02:30:15.842-08:00Thanks for the feed back Ashley, whatever you deci...Thanks for the feed back Ashley, whatever you decide to write I'm sure I'll enjoy it.<br /><br />And I can understand your reservations about her nephew witnessing one of Allison's spankings, but I think it would be ok in the hands of a skilled writer like you and would make for a funny and wonderful chapter … well maybe not so funny for Allison. :o) <br /><br />X-mas HugsS Wnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598651079166807274.post-37850260548408218892009-12-24T12:22:08.954-08:002009-12-24T12:22:08.954-08:00S W, I definitely think the embarrassment comes th...S W, I definitely think the embarrassment comes through better with Allison/Virginia being the only one getting punished, but I also like the group discomfort when everyone knows it could be them. I also think it would be fun to have Allison/Virginia doing the spanking at some point, but I don't see that situation coming around anytime soon.<br /><br />I don't know if I'll keep you happy in the exploration of her life or not. Much of what remains for this story will focus on her work life and the quest itself with her family life having a few important tie ins, but in general it will be background. I have actually considered having her nephew witness a spanking or corner time for Allison, but I've been concerned that a minor's (even though fictional) involvement might be construed as offensive and crossing over a line.<br /><br />Hugs,<br />AshAshley Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598651079166807274.post-84255407407249893262009-12-23T14:23:24.780-08:002009-12-23T14:23:24.780-08:00Lol ... yes I can understand you being amused by t...Lol ... yes I can understand you being amused by that Ashley, it's not that I'm against boys being spanked, but in your story it seems to highen the embarrassment and effectiveness of the punishments Allison is receiving if I think the people watching and enjoying her shame, especially the men are not going to find themselves in the same situation at some point in the future. If that makes any sense. <br /><br /><br />I'm also looking forward with expectation to seeing Alison back at home again in coming episodes under her strict parents rules. I loved the way her father and mother just gave her no choice in the Matter and said your coming home and that's that! I do hope they have the strength of character to see that she remains at home for the indefinite future. I can only look forward with delight at the many different and shameful character building punishments she may experience at there hands again. Your such an imaginative writer Ashley that every instalment of this is a joy to read and it's getting better and better as we follow Allison's story. And now Allison is home again I wonder just how long it will be before her little nephew finally gets to see that his pretty Aunty isn't to old to have her Big bottom spanked ... Maybe he'll be lucky enough to watch her father try out one of his nice new leather paddles on Allison's bulging bare cheeks :o) yes I can see many hours of corner time ahead for our Allison, Bless her.<br /><br />Happy Christmas to you AshleyS Wnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598651079166807274.post-30681113124620317602009-12-23T10:35:17.508-08:002009-12-23T10:35:17.508-08:00Ace, He doesn't seem like a bad guy at all doe...Ace, He doesn't seem like a bad guy at all does he? I wonder if that means anything? We'll just have to wait and see. lol. You really gave me a good laugh with your aversion to the idea a male might get a spanking in Quondam. Don't worry though, I don't have any plans to follow through on that side of things at this time. I think it's an interesting possibility and yes, I left it open like that to avoid straying too far from reality, although I do have to admit it hardly seems like it should matter in the overall scope of the story.<br /><br />S W, I find it amusing how many people feel this way. Spankings are for girls, let the boys run wild... I'm not saying I object of course, just finding it amusing. Glad you are enjoying it all and thanks for the encouragement. I'll try to keep up with pictures as often as I can, I do like how they've been turning out so far.<br /><br />Carlos, Your welcome. I pleased you are enjoying the story.<br /><br />Happy Holidays Everyone,<br />AshAshley Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598651079166807274.post-76153237141254920402009-12-23T01:09:00.202-08:002009-12-23T01:09:00.202-08:00Thanks for another great story...Thanks for another great story...Carloshttp://opss.splinder.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598651079166807274.post-85578915960656776492009-12-22T14:10:57.539-08:002009-12-22T14:10:57.539-08:00Yes I agree I'd like to think that the discipl...Yes I agree I'd like to think that the discipline it's just for the young headstrong girls as well, just like our Allison :o)... <br /><br />More Great stuff Ashley keep it up, and I'm also loving the pictures as well. :-)S Wnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598651079166807274.post-90942971261053375352009-12-22T12:43:20.503-08:002009-12-22T12:43:20.503-08:00Quite a slip up there from Mr. Hughes. He doesn...Quite a slip up there from Mr. Hughes. He doesn't seem like much a bad guy though so far. This lecture in front of the potential employees depicted in the art for today reminded me again that Quondom's discipline policies don't seem to be limited to females. I know it makes more sense and is more realistic, but it still strikes me as really odd. Bleh!♠ace of spadeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10934262823799177199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598651079166807274.post-49920291363265922562009-12-22T10:48:47.453-08:002009-12-22T10:48:47.453-08:00Paul, Thank you and I also wish you a very Merry C...Paul, Thank you and I also wish you a very Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. I was afraid this one got a little drawn out, nice to see it still read well though. Allison isn't quite done learning things, but she'll soon be back in Q5, although that may prove to be an ordeal of its own.<br /><br />Al, Thank you and I wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year also. Virginia is full of surprises still to be revealed to herself, but yes she did eventually find her own little sanctuary from the things happening to her. let me also assure you we'll be seeing a bit more of Mr. Hughes in the near future.<br /><br />Hugs,<br />AshAshley Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598651079166807274.post-24919617272131778322009-12-22T09:04:02.577-08:002009-12-22T09:04:02.577-08:00Ash,
great story. you portrayed Mr Hughes very we...Ash,<br /><br />great story. you portrayed Mr Hughes very well..also liked the way Virginia went to another place in her head during the discipline demonstration(if i am understanding that right?)the only thing that was different this time is when she went to that place in her head the little girl was not there so she had to deal with this on her own..<br /><br />I also wanted to take this time to wish you (Our<br />Writer)A MERRY CHRISTMAS and all our Commentors and the rest of the readers A MERRY CHRISTMAS.<br />ALALnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598651079166807274.post-20668253305940447302009-12-22T05:47:34.206-08:002009-12-22T05:47:34.206-08:00Ashley, nice one girl, well played.
Hopefully V...Ashley, nice one girl, well played.<br />Hopefully V's ordeal will soon be over, or does she have more to learn?<br />Loved the way you paced this episode, very skillful.<br />I'll take this opportunity to wish you a Merry Christmas and a healthy and happy New Year.<br />Warm hugs,<br />PaulPaulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03790580459962602757noreply@blogger.com