tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598651079166807274.post3829425767077885618..comments2024-02-12T00:44:04.250-08:00Comments on Quest Five: Spanking & Chastening: CurbedAshley Jhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598651079166807274.post-81132889964626659662009-12-18T14:04:34.697-08:002009-12-18T14:04:34.697-08:00Michael, Thanks, I'm very pleased at how well ...Michael, Thanks, I'm very pleased at how well the artwork has been received. It takes a bit of extra time to create in addition to the stories, but it seems like it's well worth the effort and time.<br /><br />Hugs,<br />AshAshley Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598651079166807274.post-62787514489766447552009-12-17T23:58:40.336-08:002009-12-17T23:58:40.336-08:00I forgot to mention: I love the art. It's a ma...I forgot to mention: I love the art. It's a marvel to me that you're able to keep up such a meticulous posting schedule and still have time to create these illustratations. You're doing a great job: Each illo so far has been a well-composed, cleanly designed representation of the central image of each chapter.<br /><br />MichaelMdarehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17060111580953381296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598651079166807274.post-81150184949456540392009-12-17T19:07:12.871-08:002009-12-17T19:07:12.871-08:00Carlos, Welcome and thanks. I'm glad you'r...Carlos, Welcome and thanks. I'm glad you're enjoying it.<br /><br />Al, It was definitely an interesting scene there with both her parents and a lot more going on than just the obvious too.<br /><br />Michael, Nice to hear from you again. I did figure you would enjoy this story arc even though Allison most certainly is not. lol. She's definitely not a delicate flower, but then this month's stories aren't delicate either. Allison will definitely be changed from these experiences.<br /><br />Hugs to all,<br />AshAshley Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598651079166807274.post-20276840800695789672009-12-17T00:01:08.204-08:002009-12-17T00:01:08.204-08:00Ashley, it probably won't come as a surprise t...Ashley, it probably won't come as a surprise to you that I consider this entire "Spanking and Chastening" arc to be absolute genius. You are topping yourself (no pun intended) week after week.<br /><br />It's funny that any reader who has happily swallowed the scenes of torpedo-dodging and the like would balk at these chastisement chapters, but I think it's a tribute to how well you've sucked us into this fictional reality that readers can worry about how fairly Allison is being treated. Maybe I'd be bothered too, if Allison were a one-dimensional, delicate flower of a character, but I'm confident that her inner resilience will see her through anything the narrative throws at her. It's her sense of humor and strong will that make these humiliating punishments such a fascinating and erotic challenge to the protagonist. This is, after all, spanking fiction, and, thanks to the very well-developed central character and the imaginatively devised situations she endures, it's some of the most powerfully effective spanking fiction I've ever read.<br /><br />MichaelMdarehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17060111580953381296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598651079166807274.post-31789677831163585422009-12-16T16:18:27.982-08:002009-12-16T16:18:27.982-08:00Ash,
fantastic story... The whole scene from the ...Ash,<br /><br />fantastic story... The whole scene from the actual spanking to the lecturing from Allison Mom and Dad was so well done and the reaction from Allison looking at the hem of her Dads pants was great. Oh I liked how her mom gave her a choice as if she really had one.She did but either choice she was definitely not going to like... but to state the obvious Allison not suppose to like the choices LoL...really liked this episode and looking forward to the next one.<br />ALALnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598651079166807274.post-26340362103684992652009-12-16T10:59:45.762-08:002009-12-16T10:59:45.762-08:00Great!Great!Carloshttp://opss.splinder.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598651079166807274.post-62886945557505582982009-12-16T08:19:42.364-08:002009-12-16T08:19:42.364-08:00Paul, I know this scene could easily be interprete...Paul, I know this scene could easily be interpreted as over the top. Mostly I did it because it was fun and unique and still fit within the context of the story. Allison's parents are over the top in their interactions with her and they mix reasonableness with unreasonableness in almost everything they do. How Allison is effected and copes with this is the real story and I think scenes like this one will help in understanding how Allison could or would make some of the choices coming in the near future. Additionally, I think this is a great way of showing where her inner strength and determination spring from; Having survived her parents.<br /><br />Hugs,<br />AshAshley Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598651079166807274.post-30947797544805676212009-12-16T08:05:09.743-08:002009-12-16T08:05:09.743-08:00Ace, it seemed about time for Allison's mother...Ace, it seemed about time for Allison's mother to step up a little. So far I've left the domestic scenes in the hands of her father but I alway intended for her mother to be seen as a formidable woman as well. Early on I felt the depiction might come at the expense of her father's image, but now it's really necessary to see both her parents in this similar light so that Allison's decisions in the coming chapters make solid sense.<br /><br />It's nice to see the artwork being appreciated. I really enjoy creating it, but you are correct that it is very time consuming. Hopefully, I keep improving in my ability with it all and I do plan to add a few of these in each month where ever I think they best fit. Every post is probably a bit too much to expect, but two or three a month sounds good to me.<br /><br />Hugs,<br />AshAshley Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598651079166807274.post-90472754172285379592009-12-16T07:34:56.500-08:002009-12-16T07:34:56.500-08:00Ashley, you are a very good writer but----
Warm hu...Ashley, you are a very good writer but----<br />Warm hugs,<br />Paul.Paulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03790580459962602757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4598651079166807274.post-47514720111484544572009-12-16T06:00:07.739-08:002009-12-16T06:00:07.739-08:00The punishment fit the crime splendidly. Allison&#...The punishment fit the crime splendidly. Allison's mother has clearly shown her dedication to her daughter here as well as her willingness to follow through. The appearance of the neighbor's older son to show his approval was perfect. Although it was brief and he wasn't introduced at all, it would be nice to have him or someone like him around at home again to fill the role of active witness. <br /><br />Adding the art to chapters must make it more time consuming, but it does add more depth. I hope this continues in future chapters involving punishments. After making a few more you should think about putting them in a gallery somewhere with in-picture captions. Just enough for someone who hasn't read Q5 to understand what is happening or the moral lesson involved etc.♠ace of spadeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10934262823799177199noreply@blogger.com